SETTING
The story took place at the beach, in the morning time during the first holiday,
Plot
Jerry was an eleven years old boy, who lived with his mother. One day Jerry asked his mother to take him at the beach in order to have a fun with other children. His mother agreed to take him. He was good in swimming and he raally loved it alot. He went there and met many children, speaking a language that he could not understant, nevertheless, that did not bother him. He sworn till his nose start to bled badly and he was on his own nervous, and he did not know what to do. He got tired until he wanted nothing but to go home and rest. He turned into dizzy and he was very tired, although he was tired he still wanted to do more. Finally his eyes ewre glaszed-looking. Finally Jerry went home with his mom and rest.
Main character
Jerry, he was young English boy, eleven years old boy. He respected his mother so much because he always ask for a permission to go swim. He was sa foreigner strayed fom his own beach. The only child in the family. He was a corwd because he frighted for simple things. He was curious most unchilike persistence. Finally Jerry was incredulous.
Thanks for your summary,you did good job and there are just few mistakes i can give 7/10 for that.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your summary,you did good job and there are just few mistakes i can give 7/10 for that.
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